Ryan

Pictures that represent Oregon

2009-01-21T12:47:00.000-08:00

Sentence correcting

2008-12-11T10:27:00.000-08:00

I went skating down at the pond and there were three kids from my school. We fell down again and again and we laughed so much our stomachs hurt.

I thought the lopsided game would never end. The score just kept getting worse and worse.

Martha thinks she is so cool. Well, she is not cool to me.

Joe watched a video that his mom had bought for him at the store where she worked.

Susan loved to watch football. She would watch it every sunday on t.v. and every saturday. She would go to the local college football game and she would always wear the school colors.

Anger

2008-12-10T12:35:00.000-08:00

Well, just yesterday I saw anger come from my friend and his dad. The problem was that my friend has tutoring classes and classes at Bridgeway. Well, he didn't want to go so he started arguing with his dad. His dad said, "You're grounded." Brandon didn't agree so he punched the side of his dad's work van.

So or because

2008-12-04T10:39:00.000-08:00

Anna went to the store because she needed milk.

Chris ate too much candy, so his stomach hurt.

Richard felt tired, so he bought an energy drink.

Tesla ran after the bus because she woke up late.

I ran to work because I was running late on my time.

He wasn't there, so we went back home.

2008-12-03T12:32:00.000-08:00

About two weeks ago I got in car accident in Eugene. I was trying to cross a four lane one way street and there were three lanes stopped for me. someone in the third lane pulled out into the fourth lane and hit me while I was crossing. I pulled over and grabbed my bumper and eventually the cops came out then we switched insurance information and then I was on my way but it was embarrassing.

2008-11-14T08:52:00.000-08:00

Don’t watch all your school’s games from your couch this year. Get yourself in the game by picking up tickets to one of your team’s big matchups this season

Get tickets

to one of your teams

get your self in the game

from your couch

watch all your schools games

Career

2008-11-06T12:45:00.000-08:00

The career i to choose in my life is excavation.
Some of the job requirements are, must be 18 or older and a high school diploma or GED.
Some expierence is needed which i have tied rebar for the concrete foundation

Downtown Salem

2008-10-27T12:54:00.000-07:00

Peer Editing

2008-10-16T12:36:00.000-07:00

Step 1- compliments

The first rule of peer editing is to stay positive
I really lovedyour topic
I think you used a lot of good details
I liked when you used the word .......
My favorite part was the ........
This was really fun to read because.....
I liked the way you.....

Step 2- suggestions

Be specific. "Give details"

Step 3- corrections

Spellin mistakes
Sentence mistakes
punctuation mistakes

sentence combining

2008-10-06T12:33:00.000-07:00

Mama sat.
She sat by the window.
She wore black.

Mama sat by the window and she wore black.

She sat by the window wearing black.

Mama's wearing black and also sitting by the window.

One night in pitch dark mama was sitting by the window wearing black. The night before someone broke into her car and stole some cd's and her C.D. player. The next night she decided to sit in her window wearing pitch black with the phone ready to call 911.

Blog assingment

2008-10-02T12:38:00.000-07:00

This blogger assinment we have been currently working is very interesting. I think this has been fun i personally think it's better than school work. I have also noticed that setting this up was very close to myspace like editing profile etc. One of the problems i had was the verification code you have to type in so you set up your account. I also noticed that the letters were alot more smaller than the myspace verification codes that you have to type in every time you post a comment or edit profile.